Friday, 26 August 2016

My Holiday Moment in Time

My Reflection: I was learning to write about one part of my holiday using my senses. I think I did well with putting my full stops in the correct place. I found this easy because I had good ideas to write in my story. I need to work on my capital letters.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

This is a great piece of writing Alize. I can imagine how happy you were spending time with your family and eating all those delicious things!